Tuesday, March 13, 2007

raw verse

originally posted on myspace



rough draft
untitled

Do you see that?
There-in the meadow.
That smear of red.

In the blighted patch
below the circling ravens.

That's my heart.

Staked out beneath the dull sun.
Staked out with rusted piano wire.

The ravens have been at it.
Their beaks are bloody.

And one drops from above like a rock
And then

in a heartbeat
a sweet little miracle of spread wings and sunlight
is there
like he never left

And as he gorges, his beak scrapes the taunt piano wire
releasing a raw discordant note
that I hope
is echoing in yr heart

right

now

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